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1. Practice clicking **Home: Composition 1010 J01** and your name to make sure the links work. 2. Click **"edit"** to type in this white space. 3. Notice each journal prompt numbered from 1 to 10. Type your response below each prompt. Be sure to leave two spaces between your answer and the prompt. 4. When you have finished typing your answer, **SAVE** **YOUR WORK** by clicking the **"save"** button at the top of the page. 5. You should also keep a backup of your work by highlighting each entry (click and drag over the sentences). Then copy (hold down the **ctrl button on your keyboard and then "C"** ). Open up a **Word** document. The paste onto that document (hold down the **ctrl button on your keyboard and then "V"**).


 * Journal Prompt 1.** Cofer's "My Father in the Navy" and Joyce's short story "Araby" are autobiographical or narrative in nature. Review the chapter in the Longman concerning the rhetorical mode Narration (pgs. 109-116). Discuss two narration qualities you see in the poem and the short story collectively. 1 para.

Both "My Father in the Navy" and "Araby" are both in first person. The writer is speaking directly and showing direct though and information. They both have a numerouse amount of characters and activity. For example, in "Araby" the boy is wonting to go to the fair but then when he finally gets there it is closing down. That shows forms characters and activity because of the fair.


 * Journal Prompt 2.** Conflict and conflict resolution are narration qualities. Conflicts can be man vs. man, man vs. nature, and man vs. self. Describe one example from Mayblum's "The Price We Pay" that exemplifies one of the aforementioned areas of conflict. 1 para.

This story could consist of three conflicts, man vs man, man vs self, or man vs nature. Man vs self because it is a guy trapped in a building fighting for his life. He could either give up and die or keep fighting and try and survive. Man vs man because one guy is free and able to get out but has a friend that is trapped in the building and cant get out, he has to make a decision whether to get out quick and save himself or go and help his friend and try and save his life also. Man vs nature because they may not have been able to prevent the trategy with the building and now the trapped man is fighting w the building tryin to get out.


 * Journal Prompt 3.** Use this journal to build your introductory paragraph for Narrative Paper Assignment 1. Remember your introductory paragraph must consist of a clear thesis statement and clear supporting advanced organizers. 1 para.

Growing up in my teenage years, i have always enjoyed working with children. They have always been such a joy and blessing in my life. I always had younger children in my family whether it was cousins or my newphew, when they were babies i would always spend time with them and help take care of them. In church, my best friend and I would help work in the nursery and even teach a childrens church class occasionally. Growing up it has never been a question to me what i wanted to do when i got older. I have always known i wanted to be an elementary school teacher. I want to pursue a career in elementary education with the ability to be dedicated to the children, therefore, I look forward to working with them in the classroom. Also, children have always made an impact on my life because they are our future, now i want to make an impact on their life. Finally, my elementary years were the most important in my life, it is the years that got me going in life. I always had fun and enjoyed every bit of it with my teachers, now i want to give back to others what i was able to experience in my younger years though hopefully much better.


 * Journal Prompt 4.** Find an [|advertising slogan] and write a descriptive paragraph about what an ad for that slogan should contain: discuss target audience, sensory details, and purpose. 1 para

Melts in your mouth not your hands What a wonderful taste with that chocolaty inside. Such beautiful colors of so many. Makes a great snack for children and adults. Make them original or fancy them up with your own creation to express ur feelings. M&Ms

Head-On It is a medication that is useful to relieve main on certain areas of your body. It could be your head, elbow, knee, or anywhere you feel pain. You just run this product on it and it will relieve the pain. The advertisement shows a person actually using the product to help give the audiance a better understanding of how it works and what to do with it. There is much use of repetition in the advertisement which im assuming is supose to be attention grabing.
 * Journal Prompt 5.** Read this [|article] about bad advertisement. Discuss one advertisement you've seen or heard that you believe is poor advertisement--describe the ad so that a person reading your discription could visualize the ad without seeing it. Then discuss why you believe the ad is bad. 2 para

The advertisement is very dull. It has a clear explanation of what the product is for which allows the audiance to understand it better, but personally it is a very annoying advertisement. The use of repetition is outragiouse. They continue to say the same phrase all though out the advertisement. Considering that is is emphasized to be attention getting, many find it annoying. There is only one picture through out the advertisement and it is very dull. It is not a real person it is similar to a cartoon figure kind of. The over all look at the advertisement is not very appealing to me. What i think will encourage people to buy this product is if they are actualy have this pain and they just think they tryin it is worth it, because juding my the advertisement it is not very ammusing.


 * Journal Prompt 6.** Search the internet or a magazing to find a "good" advertisement. Describe the ad so that a reader may visualize it without seeing the ad. Discuss why you believe the advertisement is good. 2 para

The product is considered to be a hygiene product that is used by many and recommended to all. The ad emphasizes the sparkling clean feeling you will have after use of this product. There are picture of fruit such as an apple to represent the many different scents you have to choose from. The over all advertisement is clean looking and refreshing.

I believe this is a good advertisement. It shows many beautiful colors that are attention grabbing. It has a attention grabbing quote at the top on the page that makes the audiance wonder what it means so therefore it encourages them to look closly at the product. It shows great representation of object to represent different scents. The prupose of the object is to given women a clean refreshing smell and eliminate odors and from the looks of the advertisement that is what it looks like. The advertisement itself looks clean adn refreshing.


 * Journal Prompt 7.** What social behaviors are teens demonstrating as tweens? What examples does the writer give? 1 para


 * Journal Prompt 8.** In Jackson's "The Lottery," one social behavior that the town engages in is group think, which can be loosely defined as individuals in a group refusing to go against the group. What other examples (at least 2) can you think of where individuals engage in group think in a dangerous manner? 1 para


 * Journal Prompt 9.** Discuss one poem and one short story similarity concerning characters, plots, settings, conflicts, or themes. 2 paragraphs


 * Journal Prompt 10.** In Walker's //Beauty//, discuss the issues that caused Walker to lose her self-esteem. 2 paragraphs


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