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1. Practice clicking **Home: Composition 1010 J01** and your name to make sure the links work. 2. Click **"edit"** to type in this white space. 3. Notice each journal prompt numbered from 1 to 10. Type your response below each prompt. Be sure to leave two spaces between your answer and the prompt. 4. When you have finished typing your answer, **SAVE** **YOUR WORK** by clicking the **"save"** button at the top of the page. 5. You should also keep a backup of your work by highlighting each entry (click and drag over the sentences). Then copy (hold down the **ctrl button on your keyboard and then "C"** ). Open up a **Word** document. The paste onto that document (hold down the **ctrl button on your keyboard and then "V"**).


 * Journal Prompt 1.** Cofer's "My Father in the Navy" and Joyce's short story "Araby" are autobiographical or narrative in nature. Review the chapter in the Longman concerning the rhetorical mode Narration (pgs. 109-116). Discuss two narration qualities you see in the poem and the short story collectively. 1 para.they both have alot of sensory detail the author of my father in the navy told about the round cap, the white cloth, the neon sign. in araby they talked about the yellow leaves, wild garden, rusty bicycle-pump, twinkling rivers Also they both shared the flashback characteristic. In my father in the navy was basically a whole flashback of the author remembering her fathers coming home. In araby he had a flashback of the conversation the young lady and two gentleman had.


 * Journal Prompt 2.** Conflict and conflict resolution are narration qualities. Conflicts can be man vs. man, man vs. nature, and man vs. self. Describe one example from Mayblum's "The Price We Pay" that exemplifies one of the aforementioned areas of conflict. 1 para. There was a conflict between adam and his self when he told the police about his friend being left behind and the man on floor 53. He blamed his self for hurrying them up the building and then it collapsed killing the police


 * Journal Prompt 3.** Use this journal to build your introductory paragraph for Narrative Paper Assignment 1. Remember your introductory paragraph must consist of a clear thesis statement and clear supporting advanced organizers. 1 para.To all tenns, I am writing a journal to express the importance of choosing your friends wisely. The first reason you should be very careful when choosing your friends is because the wrong friends can be manipulative and have their own intrest at heart. Another reason i have for wanting you to use great caution when choosing your friends is that they can take your focus off whats important. Last but not least the reason you should exercise extreme care when you decide to call someone a friend is they can persuade you through peer pressure


 * Journal Prompt 4.** Find an [|advertising slogan] and write a descriptive paragraph about what an ad for that slogan should contain: discuss target audience, sensory details, and purpose. 1 para 5 hour energy "drink it in secomds. Feel it in minutes. last for hours". I think that the target audience should be anyone who has a lot on their plate for example working moms maybe even like me a working mom that also goes to school full time. i think the ad should carry you through pictures of everthing you do through the day getting the kids on the bus getting ready for you day going to work or school doing you work . goingt to the grocery store cooking dinner bathing kids doing homework with your vhildren washing clothes getting stuff ready for the next day. the purpose of the product would be something you can use to help you get through your busy day when your are so tired but you have so much more left to do take a five hour energy


 * Journal Prompt 5.** Read this [|article] about bad advertisement. Discuss one advertisement you've seen or heard that you believe is poor advertisement--describe the ad so that a person reading your discription could visualize the ad without seeing it. Then discuss why you believe the ad is bad. 2 para there is this ad for cat food on the ad it has pictures tuscany because they want you to think this cat food has a tuscany taste there is also a chef preparing the cat food in a pan with some home grown veggies with some oil this ad isnt very good because you wouldnt even realize that it is for cat food it looks more like a resuarant i would have made it more clearly focused on the cat food and what cats would like not tuscany flavored like its for a human or something.

I think this ad is very effective because they are targeting women because thats who the product is made for. they give you a list of pros for the medicine and tell you plenty of places to go get them. So it makes it where you know alot about the product and they even give us a web address to go check it out. so i think if you are a women wanting to lose weight this ad is very effective.
 * Journal Prompt 6.** Search the internet or a magazing to find a "good" advertisement. Describe the ad so that a reader may visualize it without seeing the ad. Discuss why you believe the advertisement is good. 2 parathis ad has a light blue back ground. there is the same women showed twice one time is before she started taking slimquick and another is after she took it and lost the weight . thats at the top of the page. in the middle of the page it gives you 6 waysit helps women lose the weight 1 reduce appetite, 2 increase energy 3 increase metabolism 4 reduce water retention 5 balance hormones and 6 reduce stress . it has a picture of the product in the middle of the page . At the bottom of the page it has two different flavors for the powder supplement then along the very bottom of this page it gives you 7 different places you can buy this product.


 * Journal Prompt 7.** What social behaviors are teens demonstrating as tweens? What examples does the writer give? 1 para Wearing clothes that are not suitable for their age. Sneaking around with the opposite sex. They also sneak and wear make up. The writer tells us about the tween girls that have eating disorders at these early ages when they shouldnt even be concerned with wait. They see these modles and feel like they need to look just like them be their size and everything.


 * Journal Prompt 8.** In Jackson's "The Lottery," one social behavior that the town engages in is group think, which can be loosely defined as individuals in a group refusing to go against the group. What other examples (at least 2) can you think of where individuals engage in group think in a dangerous manner? 1 para when you fall into groups of friends at school . you tend to just fall behind whoever you think is cool and do what they do no matter who it hurts yourself or others. Also those who get involved in gangs show group think in a negitive way through drugs and violence.

In Araby and in young goodman brown they experience the same plot. The both are on a mission. The character in Araby is going to the bazaar to get the girl he likes something. He had been wanting to talk to his friends sister for a long time. He never had the never to do it though. She talked to him one day and asked if he was going to araby that next day. He said he wanted to she told him she wasnt able to because she made other plans so he told her he would bring her something back from the bazaar. IN Young goodman Brown he is going on a mission into the forest to take care of something that he feels like he really needs to take care of before morning. It never really goes into what his mission is but he is uncomfortable leaving his wife but really feels like he has to accomplish this trip throught the forest.
 * Journal Prompt 9.** Discuss one poem and one short story similarity concerning characters, plots, settings, conflicts, or themes. 2 paragraphs
 * Journal Prompt 10.** In Walker's //Beauty//, discuss the issues that caused Walker to lose her self-esteem. 2 paragraphs


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