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 * Journal Prompt 1.** Cofer's "My Father in the Navy" and Joyce's short story "Araby" are autobiographical or narrative in nature. Review the chapter in the Longman concerning the rhetorical mode Narration (pgs. 109-116). Discuss two narration qualities you see in the poem and the short story collectively. 1 para

While reading Cofer's "My Father in the Navy" and Joyce's "Araby", I noticed some narrative qualities. Two of these qualities were sensory details and flashback-past experiences. Both "My Father in the Navy" and "Araby" are told as flashbacks or childhood memories. In "My Father in the Navy", Cofer talks about waiting with her family for her father to return from sea. In "Araby", Joyce talks about a boyhood crush. They both use many sensory details. Some examples of sensory details from "My father in the Navy" are: "Stiff and immaculate"(213) and "Neon sign of a quasar"(213). Some sensory details from "Araby" are: "The air was pitilessly raw" and " Our shouts echoed in the silent street".


 * Journal Prompt 2.** Conflict and conflict resolution are narration qualities. Conflicts can be man vs. man, man vs. nature, and man vs. self. Describe one example from Mayblum's "The Price We Pay" that exemplifies one of the aforementioned areas of conflict. 1 para.

One conflict that is evident in "The Price We Pay" is man vs. nature. An example of this is when they had to find their way though the smoke to get out. It was describes as "thick and white"(132) and it "did not smell like I imagined smoke should smell"(132). The smoke was so thick that they "missed the staircase and had to double back".


 * Journal Prompt 3.** Use this journal to build your introductory paragraph for Narrative Paper Assignment 1. Remember your introductory paragraph must consist of a clear thesis statement and clear supporting advanced organizers. 1 para.

Riley, I’m writing this journal to you to discourage you from smoking, and to share my battle with quitting. One reason I want to discourage you from smoking is because quitting smoking is very difficult; I battled with quitting for years. Another reason to discourage you from smoking is because it can cause serious illnesses and diseases. Finally, I want to discourage you from smoking because it is a very expensive and time-consuming habit.


 * Journal Prompt 4.** Find an [|advertising slogan] and write a descriptive paragraph about what an ad for that slogan should contain: discuss target audience, sensory details, and purpose. 1 para

The slogan "With a name like Smuckers it has to be good", would want to include many descriptive details in an ad. It would need to appeal to mothers and include many sensory details that appeal to how good it tastes. The purpose of its ad would be to sell the product. It should also contain an picture of the product and perhaps a family eating the product. It should also probably contain something that says how inexpensive it is.


 * Journal Prompt 5.** Read this [|article] about bad advertisement. Discuss one advertisement you've seen or heard that you believe is poor advertisement--describe the ad so that a person reading your discription could visualize the ad without seeing it. Then discuss why you believe the ad is bad. 2 para

One advertisement that I thought was bad waswas for an Infiniti Ex. It had a bright orange background and there is a top-view picture of the car on the left. There is curvy writing around the car and a description of the car's safety rating and awards at the bottom left of the page. On the bottom right of the page is the emblem or logo of Nissian and Infiniti Ex. Most of the right side of the ad is blank.

This ad is not very effective. It doesn't have a good picture of the car, how much the car costs, or how many miles per gallon the car has. If i were shopping for a new car I would need to know all of these things and more. It also has a completely blank space on the right side of the ad. They could have put a side view picture of the car there.


 * Journal Prompt 6.** Search the internet or a magazine to find a "good" advertisement. Describe the ad so that a reader may visualize it without seeing the ad. Discuss why you believe the advertisement is good. 2 para

This advertisements purpose is to sell the Texturize Collection by Pantene Pro-V. The background is a neutral tan color and in the middle of the ad there is a young model with long curly brown hair. She has a long string of pearls wrapped around her neck several times and her hand once. Only her upper body is shown and it takes up all but a small portion of the page. She has stunning blue eyes that contrast perfectly with her brown hair and bright white teeth that are the same shade of white as the pearls. At the bottom of the ad is a strip of white that contains a picture of the Collection and says all day lift a hold in all caps on the left and has the logo of Pantene Pro-V on the right. Above the picture of the product there is text that reads mess things up on purpose.

I believe that this is good advertisement because it makes me want to buy the products. The models hair looks great and she looks very happy with the results she got with the products. It is Pantene so i know that I can get it at Walmart. This ad does its job perfectly**.

Journal Prompt 7.** What social behaviors are teens demonstrating as tweens? What examples does the writer give? 1 para

Tweens are exhibiting many social behaviors known to teens. They dress more sophisticated than they did a few years ago. They describe themselves as "flirtatious, sexy, trendy, athletic, and cool." Some have even turned to crime to show how grown up they are. Most tweens have started having sex. According to the text, "One in five middle-school kids is sexually active. Also, many tweens have started experimenting with drugs and alcohol.


 * Journal Prompt 8.** In Jackson's "The Lottery," one social behavior that the town engages in is group think, which can be loosely defined as individuals in a group refusing to go against the group. What other examples (at least 2) can you think of where individuals engage in group think in a dangerous manner? 1 para

Tweens, for example, demonstrate dangerous group think. Such as experimenting with drugs, alcohol, and sex. Also, racists demonstrate dangerous group think. They pass along their prejudices to their children and they in turn pass it along to their children. Its a never ending cycle.


 * Journal Prompt 9.** Discuss one poem and one short story similarity concerning characters, plots, settings, conflicts, or themes. 2 paragraphs

Both “Young Goodman Brown” and “The Lottery” are stories set in the past. The settings were the same in that they were both towns with old traditions.Both the Young Goodman Brown and Mrs. Hutchinson in the story “The Lottery” are rushing to get to an event that happens every year. I would compare Young Goodman Brown and Mrs. Hutchinson in “The Lottery” because they both rush to get their respective events; however, they did not really want to be there. In the end, they were both disappointed with the results of their events.


 * Journal Prompt 10.** In Walker's //Beauty//, discuss the issues that caused Walker to lose her self-esteem. 2 paragraphs


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